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Fw: Anyone in the mood to be cut-throat and opinionated?by "J. Foliot" <fouram(at)sympatico.ca> |
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Re-Directed for accuracy... -----Original Message----- From: J. Foliot <fouram(at)sympatico.ca> To: Gltbeach <Gltbeach(at)aol.com> Date: April 11, 1998 8:45 AM Subject: Re: Anyone in the mood to be cut-throat and opinionated? >Re-read the message... >Item one - I SPECIFICALLY STATED THAT IT WAS NOT INTENDED TO BE A FLAME >FEST. > >Item two - They SPECIFICALLY requested a _cut-throat critique_, of which I >delivered... >(So far I've not heard back from them one way or the other, however, even if >in your opinion I was too hard on them, was I wrong? Did you even bother to >visit the site in question?) > >Item three - <<<<in it's self>>> ...explain to me why this is grammatically >incorrect > >-----Original Message----- >From: Gltbeach <Gltbeach(at)aol.com> >To: fouram(at)sympatico.ca <fouram(at)sympatico.ca> >Cc: hwg-techniques(at)hwg.org <hwg-techniques(at)hwg.org> >Date: April 10, 1998 10:33 PM >Subject: Re: Anyone in the mood to be cut-throat and opinionated? > > >> >> >>Mr. F (and I use the term loosely) >> >>The second part of your msg was valid, worthwhile information, however, the >>first part of your msg should have been sent back private e-mail to the >person >>whose site you were critiquing (bashing). The entire reply is akin to >>slapping the sh_t out of someone then explaining to them why you were >>compelled to slap them in the first place and how it was for their own >good. >>I hope for the good of the individual, yes, we all have egos, you >apologize. >>And the next time you decide to start throwing rocks inside of your glass >>house please run a grammar check on it first. <<<<in it's self>>> My, my, >my, >>why did you not just slam both words together...it would not have been any >>worse. Finally, please stop dangling your participles all over my >>e-mail. >> >>Yours now and forever >> >>Gary Taylor >>http://members.aol.com/gltbeach >> >
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