Re: Critique Request: http://www.deakgroup.com/update/
by "Stephanie Thrasher" <sjthrasher(at)jps.net>
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This is a little OT, but I have a third idea about comment placement--that
it should read
...offers teachers, administrators and parents a comprehensive array...
Is there an English major who can settle this?
Stephanie
> One more thing--not meaning any offense, Pat--but the
> grammar (comma placements) on the front page is
> correct. --Susan
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