Re: Request Critique of my web Pages - Commercial

Hello Robert,

First my equipment,
Browser    : IE5
JavaScript : On
Cookies    : On
Line Speed : 28.8
Platform   : Windows 98
Screen size: 17 inch
Resolution : 1024X768
Color depth: High color (16 bit)

You don't have the image sizes specified correctly, you have to specify
both, height and width of the image. Otherwise the page will be re-rendered
once the download is complete.

Your ALT tags could probably be a bit more descriptive. The ALT tags on
images are the only way for blind or otherwise visually disabled people to
understand what the page is about.

The choice of colors is quite nice. The mouseover effect has been done
nicely, Good Job

I like the navigation, you also provided alternative text links, it's good.
BTW you might consider adding ALT tags to your navigation buttons too :-)

The image "hawkheading2.gif" doesn't fit with the background.

The visited links could maybe have a decoration:underline   (just a thought
:-))

I'm not quite sure about the "Creatures Of Flight" page. This should be on a
personal page, not here, again it's just my humble opinion.

The clients page could maybe be labelled "Portfolio" ???

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Hope this help, if you need more help just contact me :-)

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-----Original Message-----
From: Sensei Robert Joshin Althouse <hawaii(at)hawk-vision.com>
To: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Date: 23. juuni 2000. a. 6:01
Subject: Request Critique of my web Pages - Commercial


>Dear List Members:
>I have just joined this list in order to take advantage of the wonderful
>opportunity to have my pages critiqued. This is of great value to me and I
>appreciate your taking the time to do this. I have started a web design
>business called Hawk Vision and my web page can be found at
>http://www.hawk-vision.com. I have done one other page for the Zen Center
of
>Hawaii which is at http://www.zencenterhawaii.org.
>Thank you and Aloha from Hawaii
>
>Robert Althouse
>Hawk Vision
>

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