Re: Site critique please

by "Katsuey(at)katsuey.com" <katsuey(at)katsuey.com>

Date:	Thu, 2 Dec 1999 18:09:53 -0600
To:	<hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
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> http://www.interlog.com/~karma/Assign6V2/Home.html

Tanya, your drawings are nice enough that I would like to see
your site improve to show them off better.  This site could be
greatly improved by choosing one font face and one font color.
The various colors are very distracting and take the eye over
letting people look at your drawings.

Next, the table borders are also very distracting.  Turn off your
borders so that tables don't show and consider making graphical
frames ( I don't mean html frames) to inset your drawings into.
You can do this with Photoshop or PaintShopPro.  Your written
content describing your graphics also could be beefed up - think
of how they describe paintings in art galleries.

I also noticed that some of your graphics have a lot of little
white specs in them.  I'm wondering if they were scanned properly
or if you px resolution is set correctly.  These were original
drawings, right?

You have a nice start but the above are just suggestions to help
you improve the site.

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