Re: http://www.geocities.com/heartland/2981/

Hi Thomas,

To begin with there seems to be a lot of empty space in the right margin,
about 1/3 of the screen for me viewing in I.E. 4.0.  If you would widen the
margin, the scroll bar would probably disappear (definitely a plus).  The
title at the top reads "Untitled Normal Page".  You should give it a name.
Also the heading is a little hard to read where it overlaps the navigation
bar on the side.  The content seemed good and the page loaded really fast,
unusual for most of my experiences with GeoCities.

One further item.  I thought that GeoCities didn't allow commercial sites.
I know you aren't offering products or services, but you are advertising for
a commercial establishment.  Better check into it before they pull your
page.
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-----Original Message-----
From: Thomas Ellingsen <jtelling(at)sn.no>
To: hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org <hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org>
Date: Saturday, January 03, 1998 10:56 PM
Subject: http://www.geocities.com/heartland/2981/


>Hi people!
>
>Please critique: http://www.geocities.com/heartland/2981/
>I made this site for an English pub very cheap (moneywise). I tried not to
>make it *look* cheap though, but I guess that's up to you. It's not big,
>and it loads reasonably fast. No junk-gfx. This is the pub's homepage,
>they're not trying to sell anything via the web at least.
>On advance, thank you :)
>
>Thomas
>
>

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