Re: Please Critique
by "Mark Goldberg" <storyman(at)netrox.net>
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"Charles Nance" <cnance(at)idcnet.com>,
"HWG-Critique" <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org> |
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Checked your site. It was nice, cleanly presented and informative. The =
spiral notebook background was a nice touch. However, there are some =
typefaces that don't work well with drop shadow and Kids is one of them. =
It makes it difficult to read. On your table of contents page, you did =
not re-size your family photo proportionately, so they look squished.
Also, PLEASE credit the late, great Harry Chapin with "Cat's in the =
cradle," not Cat Stevens!
Mark
http://www.netrox.net/~storyman
-----Original Message-----
From: Charles Nance <cnance(at)idcnet.com>
To: HWG-Critique <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Date: Thursday, January 15, 1998 9:01 AM
Subject: Please Critique
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I am new to this list, but would very much appreciate a Critique of =
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http://www.geocities.com/Heartland/1257/
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touch. However, there are some typefaces that don't work well with drop =
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<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 face=3DArial size=3D2>Also, PLEASE credit the =
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Harry Chapin with "Cat's in the cradle," not Cat =
Stevens!</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>Mark</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2><B>-----Original =
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