Re: sini your site???

Sini,

Well I always like to find good in sites and there is good in all including
yours but on this end anyway I see alot wrong. Maybe its the way you said
"Not to look at the English" but that is the problem...

The Main page, sites wrap, not cool.
The Black Plain Background, always a sure sign of a beginner.
Pictures not in full, cut in half (unless suppose to be).
You have used Tables where Tables may not be needed in your design.

Will stop there, maybe just my end (640x480, IE 4.0 Pent 266mhz, 33.6,
64bit) but do not think so. Good Start I would say but more time needed,
maybe a little more in depth or maybe more on a subject with graphics or
background to suit it. In short my personal thought is more Content, more
eye material, more time. Maybe something on Finland?

Ben

Dragon Works
E-Mail: dragonwk(at)ix.netcom.com
URL: http://pw1.netcom.com/~bmccune/index.html
Ben McCune
bmccune(at)ix.netcom.com
"Atop the Dragon's Wings he rode, Those strudy wings of Old"
-----Original Message-----
From: sini makela <sini.makela(at)Helsinki.FI>
To: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Date: Tuesday, February 10, 1998 10:43 AM


>
>Hello,
>
>Just joined the list and though I  mostly want to see pages made by others,
>I have also a page of my own which I would like to have some feedback.
>It's smallish personal page located at http://www.helsinki.fi/~asemakel/
>and what else.. I guess what I mostly wanted to know is how professional
you
>think the design is (do I have any hope in my guest for coming HTML pro?)
>and so on. Oh, and try to ignore the awkward English on the pages.
>
>Thanks already
>
>:sini
>--
>sini.makela(at)helsinki.fi
>http://www.helsinki.fi/~asemakel/
>
>

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