Re: http://www.hmex.ao.net/CRI/index.html

by "bmccune" <bmccune(at)ix.netcom.com>

 Date:  Wed, 18 Feb 1998 06:44:10 -0600
 To:  "Craig T. Harding" <guide(at)ao.net>,
"Critique List" <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
  todo: View Thread, Original
>I probably should have also mentioned that the URI is in the Subject
>line.  Here is is in the text area.
>
>http://www.hmex.ao.net/CRI/index.html
>
>--
>Craig T. Harding

233mhz
33.6
IE 4.0
640x480
Nice site Craig, functional, easy nav., looks good to me, works fine all
links. I just have 2 suggestions and maybe not even really worth the
mention.

1) The Contact information at the bottom, its off to the left, would look
better I think Centered. Also it is on some pages but not all of them..

2) This is just me but will mention. You use T and F by the phone numbers.
You have spelled out everything in detail threw out the site. Why could it
not be;

                            Voice
                            XXX XXX-XXXX
                            Fax
                            XXX XXX-XXXX

            Spelling I will not comment on, AIN'T that good myself :)

                      Give the Man a Web Dingie, Looks Good........

Dragon Works
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Ben McCune
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"Atop the Dragon's Wings he rode, Those strudy wings of Old"
-----Original Message-----
From: Craig T. Harding <guide(at)ao.net>
To: Critique List <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Date: Wednesday, February 18, 1998 2:09 AM
Subject: http://www.hmex.ao.net/CRI/index.html

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