Re: Please critique my site

Hiya Credo!

Well, I've visited your web site, and it's EXCELLENT!

The pages load fast (in contrary your concern) with 2 of the many PC's
available here (had an over-the-shoulder-looking-employee say "Oooh! Where's
it at?" - that's why 2 PC's here visited your page ;). These PC's were a
486DX4/133 with 64 mb ram, a P300II with 128 mb ram, both with a 33k6
connection, and screens at 800x600xmillions of colors mode.

There was no "Jeez... waiting!" comment. Actually, we were surprised as your
page had plenty of images and also music!

Contents? It's great! Plenty of text with humour and without "bore", simple
but efficient layout. Only 3 little things came up during the visit: The
text/horizontal bars on the main page overlaps some of the background (the
left side) - this is not the case for the links to the other pages on your
site, which makes it a little "strange". Suggestion would be to move the
text a step to the right and/or center the horizontal bars.

The actual links to the other pages on your site were a little "thy shall
seek"-quest for a moment. But then we discovered that the flickering balls
were the links. Suggestion: Make the text itself a link too, so one can see
it clearly. Maybe moving this to the very top of the page, but it should be
fine where it is now.

Cyberooni's - where are they? In other words, the page wasn't found. Maybe
that's the one you said you were still working on - if so, should be nice to
place a "I'm still working on this page" page, or disable that link for the
while. If not, then it's probably "oops".

Great job!

Sincerely,
    Mike Green - EmixodE Communications

PS: ofcourse I had to sign your guestbook too. I replaced the URL with yours
however - I didn't wish to advertise but feel free to change it where you
see fit - www.emixode.com

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