Re: Commercial site - RGA

-----Original Message-----
From: Chris Wilson <chris(at)cjetech.co.uk>
To: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Date: Saturday, March 21, 1998 9:46 AM
Subject: Commercial site - RGA

>Hi
>I've tried getting this critiqued a couple of times before, but with no
>luck.
>Would you please look at www.rga.co.uk and tell me what you think
>Cheers,
>Chris

    Well lets see if we can eliminate this problem....

Looking at your site now, well layed out, but would agree that the Index
page and the map page is little slow.

I felt in looking at your links, introduction, order etc all left me at the
end thinking something was missing. You done such a fine job of laying
everything out then it just ends. Like a sentence w/o a period

So what could it be I was wanting to see????? Well lets think on this..
Business site! Graphics really not needed... More Info, nope, that was real
good... Hmmm. How about just a  <Back> button at the bottom.  Yep that would
do it... That would end the page instead of leaving it open....

Chief, other than those 2 little items I feel that a " Give this Man a Web
Dinky is in order", nice layout...

Ben

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