Re: Revised, validated, and ready for review... [http://www.pris.bc.ca/mileston/]
by "Sebastian de Raadt" <sderaadt(at)clear.net.nz>
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>http://www.pris.bc.ca/mileston/
Hi Paul and the list
I visited you site and have a few comments, all IMHO.
1. The background is nice, and seamless! Well done! This is one of the rare
occasions I have seen a textured background work well.
2. The (red) logo/title was a bit jagged, it needs anti-aliasing. At least a
Gaussian blur might help. Post the -graphics list for more help on this one.
3. I would put the contact info on a separate page - it saves a little
download time (important if you have a slow connection like mine), it also
means less scrolling and finally it is generally the 'done' thing.
4. The pages looked good in both 640x480 and 600x800 resolutions, though a
mac surfer might have to scroll a little.
5. I do like the picture of your premises - it is something different, in
the snow!
6. In your code, I found this:
<META name="rating" content="safe for children">
AFAIK, this isn't valid and will be ignored. What you need is a PICS label.
This is obtainable from RSAC [1] or SafeSurf [2]. It is an easy, free and
quick process getting one.
7. Your graphics were fast loading.
8. Your code looked very good...well it validated!
9. You haven't set a font for the main text, so it defaults for most users
to Times Roman, not very nice for a corporate site. I suggest verdana, a
nice sans-serif font. And for those that don't have it, put arial,helvetica
and sans-serif after it.
10. Although I didn't visit all pages, I would have liked more photographs
of your offices, people, products, etc, just to liven it up a bit.
All up a well designed, clean and uncluttered site!
Cheers
Sebastian
[1] http://www.rasc.com
[2] http://www.safesurf.com/
Win95
MSIE4
600x800 and 640x480 res with 32-bit colour
28.8 dialup from New Zealand
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http://www.rh.steiner.school.nz/sebastian
"Logic is an organised way of going wrong
with confidence"
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