Hi Dwarf,

the boxes are funny ONE time, but while navigating thru your site they
really get annoying! I'd suggest to abandon them completly, the Metallica
bg-music doensn't work, I like the animated fish, but I think your page is a
bit to large, I had to scroll quite a while to see everything, what about
rearanging it (maybe with tables), I like your wave-file collection! Might I
use some of them on my own homepage (you can go there if you want to find
something what you could need)?

bye Odin
(http://member.ycom.at/~kroeger)
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Von: Dwarf - <emilyg(at)hotmail.com>
An: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Datum: Dienstag, 09. Juni 1998 16:19
Betreff: Personal Site


>http://members.tripod.com/~Weirdness/
>Please comment on this page..I changed the backround and the
>colors are messed up so I'm looking for suggestions on that..and
>only the first half of the page loads on Netscape..I'm not sure why.
>Thanks
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>-Emily/Dwarf/DwarfKDZ
>http://members.tripod.com/~Weirdness/
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