Critique, Please

Hello All,

If you have a chance I would sincerely appreciate any feedback about this
site. It is adult content (R rated) as it is a work in progress for a
playboy playmate. Although there is no full nudity on it yet, you may want
to skip this one if you think you will be offended by such material. It has
been a rush job so far as I had to do it in a week. Much more material will
be added over the next month but I wanted to have it checked out before I
got too far along. It is also my first commercial site. Your comments,
critiques and suggestions are appreciated. Thank you in advance for your
help.


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Kindest Regards,

David Lavallee

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