Re: http://www.aleshamarieoreskovich.com

by "William F. Ryals" <ryals(at)ix.netcom.com>

 Date:  Fri, 1 Jan 1999 02:49:28 -0500
 To:  "David Lavallee" <dlavall(at)gte.net>,
<hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
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David,

I took a quick trip through the site.

P75 with 40MB ram
800x600 256 colors
34.6K connection
IE 4.0

Pages loaded quickly. All internal links appear solid.

Pleasing use of color, good balance between content and images.

Only saw one thing that I would change - the text runs border-to-border. =
You might want to consider adding a little white space by using <style> =
to give a 5-10% margin on both sides or if reverse compatibility is an =
issue, including all the body content within a centered <table> at =
80-90% width.

All in all, a tastefully done site.

William F. Ryals
ryals(at)ix.netcom.com


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<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 face=3DArial size=3D2>David,</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 face=3DArial size=3D2></FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>I took a quick trip through the =
site.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2></FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 face=3DArial size=3D2>P75 with 40MB =
ram</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 face=3DArial size=3D2></FONT><FONT =
face=3DArial=20
size=3D2>800x600 256 colors</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>34.6K connection</FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>IE 4.0</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2></FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 face=3DArial size=3D2>Pages loaded quickly. =
All internal=20
links appear solid.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 face=3DArial size=3D2></FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>Pleasing use of color, good balance =
between content=20
and images.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2></FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>Only saw one thing that I would change =
- the text=20
runs border-to-border. You might want to consider adding a little white =
space by=20
using &lt;style&gt; to give a 5-10% margin on both sides or if reverse =
<FONT=20
color=3D#000000>compatibility </FONT>is an issue, including all the body =
content=20
within a centered &lt;table&gt; at 80-90% width.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2></FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>All in all, a tastefully done =
site.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2></FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2>William F. Ryals</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2><A=20
href=3D"mailto:ryals(at)ix.netcom.com">ryals(at)ix.netcom.com</A></FONT></DIV>
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