Re: Desperat
by "Laura and Rob Dowling" <DOWLINGRL(at)prodigy.net>
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http://home.talkcity.com/WallSt/scottonline=20
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I think that you did a good job with the site. I am so inspired when I =
see people your age doing such interesting work. I teach kids your age, =
and believe me, not that many can do stuff like this or even come close. =
=20
About your page:
I found I thing that bugs me. When I go to another site, I don't like =
the frame thing from the previous site (yours...in this case) I like to =
see the page the way the author intended. Can you design your frames so =
that we loose them when we visit your links. We can still press the back =
button!
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Laura Dowling
dowlingrl(at)prodigy.net
http://pages.prodigy.net/dowlingrl/home.htm
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Reach me by ICQ. My ICQ# is 15690083 or,
* Page me online through my Personal Communication Center: =
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-----Original Message-----
From: Adrian Fischer <hfisher1(at)elp.rr.com>
To: Scott Desveaux <sdesveaux(at)usa.net>
Cc: Hwg Critique <hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org>
Date: Sunday, January 31, 1999 10:57 AM
Subject: Re: Desperat
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Hi Scott,=20
Not bad....you need to have a look at your mouseovers. I know they =
are supposed to move (I think) but they all do it differently. Perhaps =
more care is required when aligning your graphics over each other. Your =
splash page was ok but the counter is miles down the bottom (for what =
reason?). I could be wrong but it also looks like you chopped the top =
and bottom off your scottonline chrome image (?). All in all not a bad =
effort. More attention to the smal things though would make it much =
better.=20
Adrian Fischer=20
Scott Desveaux wrote:=20
Hello my faithful list. Here is the task I feel I must bestow =
upon you:I am a 13 year old programmer (;-) who just started learning =
HTML 3 months ago, I haven't released any other sites, but I have many =
projects on the go.Before I fling this site into the world that is the =
internet, I request severe Critiqeing (sp),please help me out,and be =
sure to GIVE any comments that you feel are needed, I don't care, I =
thrive on criticizm.I really, really, really hope that you all can help =
me out, because I want this to blow my friends (who think the're better =
than me) away.http://home.talkcity.com/WallSt/scottonlineThanks in =
advance,and I know that you'll come through. ~scott P.S. I repeat, I =
thrive on Criticizm, and I want the truth, I can handle the truth! =
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Scott Desveaux (A Proud Student of Joe Barta)=20
sdesveaux(at)usa.net=20
http://home.talkcity.com/WallSt/scottonline (New Project, Much =
More to come)=20
Member of: HTML Writers Guild, International WebMasters =
Association, Vice-Prez of =A7mirk Inc.=20
Icq: 16217003=20
Aol Im: skott13=20
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<DIV><FONT face=3DArial><FONT size=3D-1><A=20
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<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>I think that you did a good job with =
the site. I=20
am so inspired when I see people your age doing such interesting work. I =
teach=20
kids your age, and believe me, not that many can do stuff like this or =
even come=20
close. </FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>About your page:</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>I found I thing that bugs me. When I go to another =
site, I=20
don't like the frame thing from the previous site (yours...in this case) =
I like=20
to see the page the way the author intended. Can you design your frames =
so that=20
we loose them when we visit your links. We can still press the back=20
button!</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>Laura Dowling<BR><A=20
href=3D"mailto:dowlingrl(at)prodigy.net">dowlingrl(at)prodigy.net</A><BR><A=20
href=3D"http://pages.prodigy.net/dowlingrl/home.htm">http://pages.prodigy=
.net/dowlingrl/home.htm</A><BR>------------------------------------------=
----------<BR>Reach=20
me by ICQ. My ICQ# is 15690083 or,<BR>* Page me online through my =
Personal=20
Communication Center: <A=20
href=3D"http://wwp.mirabilis.com/15690083">http://wwp.mirabilis.com/15690=
083</A>=20
(go there and try it!) or,<BR>* Send me E-mail Express directly to my =
computer=20
screen <A=20
href=3D"mailto:15690083(at)pager.mirabilis.com">15690083(at)pager.mirabilis.com=
</A><BR>----------------------------------------------------<BR></FONT></=
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<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2><B>-----Original =
Message-----</B><BR><B>From:=20
</B>Adrian Fischer <<A=20
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href=3D"mailto:hfisher1(at)elp.rr.com">hfisher1(at)elp.rr.com</A>><BR><B>To:=
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</B>Scott Desveaux <<A=20
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href=3D"mailto:sdesveaux(at)usa.net">sdesveaux(at)usa.net</A>><BR><B>Cc: =
</B>Hwg=20
Critique <<A=20
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href=3D"mailto:hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org">hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org</A>&g=
t;<BR><B>Date:=20
</B>Sunday, January 31, 1999 10:57 AM<BR><B>Subject: </B>Re:=20
Desperat<BR><BR></DIV></FONT>Hi Scott, <BR>Not bad....you need to =
have a=20
look at your mouseovers. I know they are supposed to move (I =
think)=20
but they all do it differently. Perhaps more care is required =
when=20
aligning your graphics over each other. Your splash page was =
ok but=20
the counter is miles down the bottom (for what =
reason?). I=20
could be wrong but it also looks like you chopped the top and bottom =
off=20
your scottonline chrome image (?). All in all not a bad =
effort. =20
More attention to the smal things though would make it much better.=20
<P>Adrian Fischer=20
<P>Scott Desveaux wrote:=20
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<FONT face=3DArial><FONT size=3D-1>Hello my faithful list. Here =
is the task=20
I feel I must bestow upon you:</FONT></FONT><FONT =
face=3DArial><FONT=20
size=3D-1>I am a 13 year old programmer (;-) who just started =
learning=20
HTML 3 months ago, I haven't released any other sites, but I =
have many=20
projects on the go.</FONT></FONT><FONT face=3DArial><FONT =
size=3D-1>Before I=20
fling this site into the world that is the internet, I request =
severe=20
Critiqeing (sp),</FONT></FONT><FONT face=3DArial><FONT =
size=3D-1>please help=20
me out,</FONT></FONT><FONT face=3DArial><FONT size=3D-1>and be =
sure to GIVE=20
any comments that you feel are needed, I don't care, I thrive on =
criticizm.</FONT></FONT><FONT face=3DArial><FONT size=3D-1>I =
really, really,=20
really hope that you all can help me out, because I want this to =
blow my=20
friends (who think the're better than me) =
away.</FONT></FONT><FONT=20
face=3DArial><FONT size=3D-1><A=20
=
href=3D"http://home.talkcity.com/WallSt/scottonline">http://home.talkcity=
.com/WallSt/scottonline</A></FONT></FONT><FONT=20
face=3DArial><FONT size=3D-1>Thanks in =
advance,</FONT></FONT><FONT=20
face=3DArial><FONT size=3D-1>and I know that you'll come=20
through.</FONT></FONT> <FONT face=3DArial><FONT=20
size=3D-1>~scott</FONT></FONT> <FONT face=3DArial><FONT =
size=3D-1>P.S. I=20
repeat, I thrive on Criticizm, and I want the truth, I can =
handle the=20
truth!</FONT></FONT> <FONT face=3DArial><FONT=20
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ONT>=20
<BR><FONT face=3DArial><FONT size=3D-1>Scott Desveaux (A Proud =
Student of=20
Joe Barta)</FONT></FONT> <BR><FONT face=3DArial><FONT =
size=3D-1><A=20
=
href=3D"mailto:sdesveaux(at)usa.net">sdesveaux(at)usa.net</A></FONT></FONT>=20
<BR><FONT face=3DArial><FONT size=3D-1><A=20
=
href=3D"http://home.talkcity.com/WallSt/scottonline">http://home.talkcity=
.com/WallSt/scottonline</A>=20
(New Project, Much More to come)</FONT></FONT> <BR><FONT=20
face=3DArial><FONT size=3D-1>Member of: HTML Writers Guild, =
International=20
WebMasters Association, Vice-Prez of §mirk =
Inc.</FONT></FONT>=20
<BR><FONT face=3DArial><FONT size=3D-1>Icq: =
16217003</FONT></FONT> <BR><FONT=20
face=3DArial><FONT size=3D-1>Aol Im: skott13</FONT></FONT> =
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