Re: crit: parksroyalcleaners.com

Hello Tom,
I like the design of the page. It looks quite professional and is easy on
the eyes.

The outside.jpg is too 'foggy'. You should compress it a bit less, if you
don't want to make the size of the file any bigger just publish the image
slightly smaller.

The navigation is nice. I love the mouseover effect in your case. Although
alternative text links at the bottom of the page would be nice (because of
considerations relating to accessibility and compability).

Try to make the meta description tag a bit more descriptive. Try to make it
a bit 'invitive' so that when people see this text in Search Engines they
would feel "Yes, this is what I'm looking for, I'll check it out." Trust me
descriptive meta tags work a lot better.

There is a alt tag like this <IMG alt=Services border=0 height=20
src="royalcleaners_files/servicestitle.gif" width=188>, consider putting the
text "Services" in quotation marks. I checked the page a bit further and you
have a lot more alt text without quotation marks. Please change it.

Hope this helps.

Best wishes,
Lauri V�in
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----- Original Message -----
From: <WebSyntaxDesign(at)aol.com>
To: <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: 24. juuni 2000. a. 6:15
Subject: crit: parksroyalcleaners.com


> Hi,
>
> I would appreciate it if you would critique the website at
> http://www.parksroyalcleaners.com/ from a color and design standpoint, as
> well as compatibility with different browsers and platforms.  Any
suggestions
> for improvement would be greatly appreciated!
>
> Thanks,
> Tom
> websyntax.com

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