Re: feedback on personal site please 2nd request

Peter,

When I click on the "Plink" at the top of the index page, I'm taken to a
framed page with 'action cancelled page not available' in both frames. This
soon changes to http://www.delvalnet.com/pchome/index4.html .  I'm using IE
5 and windows 98 with everything enabled.

The scrolling marquee on mouseover is an interesting effect,  but not easy
to read, and it took a good while for me to figure out that it was part of
your navigation info, so it was changing extremely rapidly and impossible to
understand as my mouse passed over your various navigation elements.

I do like the italics on link mouseovers; it's a nice subtle effect.  I also
like the underlining of visited links.

Just my opinion,
Kim


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   Kimberley Mitchell                           (732) 750-1941
   Member: HTML Writers Guild        kim(at)mighty-sites.com
   Mighty Sites Web Design               http://www.mighty-sites.com
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----- Original Message -----
From: Peter Cutler <pcs(at)pobox.com>
To: Diana Petersen <dixiedi(at)pclnet.net>; critique <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: Monday, November 08, 1999 6:47 PM
Subject: RE: feedback on personal site please 2nd request


> Diana,
>
> thanks for the feedback.
>
> What I wanted to hear about specifically, as I mentioned in my post was
> about the navigation system, and the accessiblility to the site with
various
> browsers, none of which you have commented on.
>
> About not figuring out what the site was about, that also was clearly
stated
> in my original post as well as on the 'about this site' link, which in on
> the 'front' page accessed after the splash page.
>
> As for more dead links than not, indicates that you did not attempt to
visit
> many of the links among the hundreds on the various pages. I do know that
> some links go 'dead' after a while, but I also know that the vast majority
> of the links are quite active.
>
> That being said, I do truly appreciate your taking the time to visit and
to
> respond.
>
> Peter
>
> > When you made your first request, I went to your home page; I was
> > immediately unsure what your site was about, so I left. Not every
personal
> > site is for every other individual to enjoy.
> > Since you have not received many critiques, I returned, determined to
> > "figure" it out. Unfortunately, I found more dead links than not, and
gave
> > up again. :o(
> > Teaneck NJ Class of '68 Celebs, this is where the dead links were.
> > The other links above the one I have already mentioned, have a very tiny
> > area of activity. It was difficult to "land on one."
> > then perhaps you should look at check these pages/sites, where
> > you will find
> > information about these issues.  Oops! perhaps you should check your
> > grammar.
> > I understand you are in the middle of a rebuild, but maybe, you
> > requested a
> > critique just a bit to soon!? Or are you just wanting us to do
everything
> > you should be doing after putting the initial idea to script, you did
> > mention you don't have to time to validate the HTML, maybe you don't
have
> > time to have a personal page.
> > Diana
> > http://www.webdesigns-4-you.com
> >
> >
>

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