You made some creative use of tables.  Very nice.

I found your main graphic -- Marble Art -- colors hard to see and
determine the word Art.

Have you thought on the Index.htm page to have the main graphic on the
left side cut into individual graphics?  That way, you could use an Alt
tag for each instead of mapping.  For those who have graphics turned
off, it may be a little more interesting for them, and they would be
able to navigate better.

You may want to continue with the table down to include the bottom line,
"Created by...."  That way, you can center it in a table cell.  As it is
now, you have designed for a 640 pixel screen width.  However, your
bottom line is not 640 pixel limited.  Therefore, for the person who is
viewing from a 800 pixel screen width (or wider) the bottom line is
centered to the screen width, not to the table width; thus making an
interesting look.

Nice work.


> -----Original Message-----
> From:	Thomas Ellingsen [SMTP:jtelling(at)sn.no]
> Sent:	Wednesday, December 10, 1997 5:52 PM
> To:	hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org
> Subject:	Re: hwg-critique-digest V1 #34
> 
> HI Everybody!
> 
> I have started a "pretend" web-design agency on
> http://home.sol.no/~jtelling/marblearts/
> and I want to know what people think of it. I don't plan to pursue the
> project at first but wait untill I get more practice. Personally I use
> MSIE
> 3 (win95)@800x600, 16bits colors. I would like to know what you think
> about
> one or more of these things ;
> general appearance
> 	-graphics
> 	-tableing
> 	-colors
> loadtime
> (HTML made with frontpage, but with some addings from me)
> 
> The site is not very big and not very informative yet.
> I use small text with MSIE.
> If any of you would take a screencapture of the initial page (PSP does
> it)
> I would be very happy :)
> To Bart of BGRAFYX: I "lent" some of your text on bgrafyx.com just to
> have
> some text initially. The site is not advertised anywhere on the net
> except
> here yet, so I hope you can excuse my theft. I will lose it soon when
> I can
> come up with a text of my own. (if it makes you very mad I'll move it
> onthe
> instance)
> 
> Thomas

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