You have a very novel web site.  And whereas I normally do not like dark
backgrounds and light text, in you homepage it works.  You have done
some nice work with the theme.  The only negative is in the icons at the
bottom of the home page....in particular, the one for the loo.  I
couldn't see it.  You may want to lighten it up a bit.

Great stuff

> -----Original Message-----
> From:	JeremiasD(at)aol.com [SMTP:JeremiasD(at)aol.com]
> Sent:	Friday, December 12, 1997 11:57 PM
> To:	hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org
> Subject:	critique please: "T&J"
> 
> I've just signed up with the HWG so I'd like to get a baseline reading
> before
> I start screwing with things <G>:
> 
> the "Thistle & Joe" Virtual Scottish Pub & Coffeehouse
> http://users.aol.com/JeremiasD/
> 
> respectfully invites the members of HWG to come round for an
> inspection. ;)
> (In particular, the ad banners are in tryout probation...) It's a
> personal
> page, although it does have a small giftshop tucked away in the back.
> ;)
> 
> 
> S Lynn
> JeremiasD(at)aol.com
> http://users.aol.com/JeremiasD/

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