Re: critique
by "Kim Walker" <kim(at)prepress-graphics.com>
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Sat, 24 Aug 2002 12:24:17 -0400 |
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"Steve Devoti" <steve.devoti(at)worldnet.att.net> |
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hwg-critique(at)hwg.org |
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I don't have much to add to the previous critique.
The image maps seem to be slightly off. On the Links & Resourses page, pointing at the top of the "D" in diagnosis appears to select the link above it. On the Symptoms and Misconceptions page, the "A" in About CF is outside the map.
Also on the Symptoms and Misconceptions page, the pop-ups are too small. I could only see two or three short lines of info. In Mozilla 1.1b, there is no scroll down button (probably a bug), but the scroll bar is complete in IE5.5 and Opera 6.04. Still the windows could be larger, or at least resizeable.
Otherwise, your site is nice and neat -- no distractions. The content appears to have been well prepared, a lot of research behind the site.
Are you personally connected to a CF victim, or is this for a friend? My nephew was a victim, he died at the age of 19 while waiting for a lung transplant. His first cousin also has CF (on the other side, not related to me). I graduated with a girl who had CF. She died two years later. She had two siblings with CF who passed before she did. I can appreciate your effort.
Good work!
Kim Walker
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