Re: New address/new look revisited

by "Queen Dido" <romanbtch(at)hotmail.com>

Date:	Tue, 30 Dec 1997 20:47:10 PST
To:	hwg-critique(at)hwg.org, storyman(at)netrox.net
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Hi =) I visited your pages, and found them both really nicely written. 
There were only a few things that I think u might want to take a look 
at:
P166, 28.8 bps, Netscape 3.01, 800x600

-On your newsletters page, the newsletters seemed a bit blurry. Try 
antialiasing them to make them look sharper, or sharpening them a bit. 

-Same on the advertising page.. also, they took a while to load (though 
interlacing helped). See if you can make them into jpg format, and try 
to sharpen them a bit more. 

-The logo (Mark's Copy) is a bit jagged.. but that might have been done 
on purpose (?).

The reason why I think you need aliased images is because that is 
exactly what you're selling: your artwork. They look too jagged, too 
"computer-like" and basically makes those pretty images lose a bit of 
it. Other than that, i like your presentation and layout =)

-Nat

Feel free to visit

http://www.ben2.ucla.edu/~nate/

Happy Holidays!


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