Re: http://web.access.net.au/bentonproduction/

by "Queen Dido" <romanbtch(at)hotmail.com>

 Date:  Fri, 02 Jan 1998 01:11:49 PST
 To:  mjhay2(at)student.monash.edu.au
 Cc:  hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org
  todo: View Thread, Original
Hi, I am currently looking at your site, which looks pretty good, btw, 
and had a few comments (not really criticism, just thinks you might have 
overlooked).

-You might want to add a title to your main (index) page. It shows the 
URL, which looks like the page is more or less a beta version. A title 
looks more professional. 

-The graphics for the menu are kinda jagged... you should anti-alias 
them, if you can. If you are using photoshop, it shouldn't be difficult 
to do =)

-When you describe the accomodations, you might want to add some small 
images in the page (bed and breakfast) of the cottage. It'd be nice to 
see what you guys are talking about, and also it would make it easier on 
the eye to read that page, since there is so much text. I just kind of 
skimmed the whole thing cause there was so much text to read.. 

-Other than that, the page looks great =) keep it up =)

-Nat



Feel free to visit
http://www.ben2.ucla.edu/~nate/



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