- -Dana  wrote: bdana(at)idirect.com


>I put together this site:
>http://webhome.idirect.com/~bdana/cl/test and
>appreciate any comments. This is my first corporate looking (I
>hope) website.

Hi to Dana and other HWG critique members. 

I have been sending all my latest critiques directly to the site
authors, but there is one problem here on this mostly gorgeous site
that I find on many web sites, so I am sending it to the group:

Odd things happen to parts of some pages when I change my font
viewing sizes. (I often critique a site with 2 or more font size,
sometimes with 2 or more screen sizes.) The problem here is with
the Living Arts that is written sideways on the inside pages.
Sometimes there are strange breaks like Livi   ngArts, or LivingA
rts. It does look odd and unplanned.

Also, the FUN word, and the dancers to the right of it don't match
up on the front page. And why no address, and email address on the
front page?

Other than seeing if you can somehow fix those problems I think the
site is beautiful and very artsy, as it should be. You have some
great pics that loaded pretty quickly. My first thought upon
entering the site was that I wanted to be a part of those events,
so you are on the right track. 

The blue text looked good here, but then I have my computer set at
256 colors so that may have made a difference.

Please accept the criticism as a way to fine tune a classy site
with well-designed graphics. 

My viewing stats: MSIE 3x; Pentium PC Win95; 800x600, 256 colors,
with a couple of pages looked at in 640x480, checked in different
font sizes; 15" monitor; 31.2 connection. (Did I forget anything?)

Feel free to email me dircetly as I only get the digest version and
am often days behind everyone else.

Regards,
Joanne Fate
lafate(at)worldnet.att.net
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