Hi Craig & fellow HWG members,

I hope that this critique not too late. Overall the site looks good
but there are a few things I would like to comment on:

I couldn't find any wurdz spellt rong, even though I looked.
I think it was wise to keep the site fairly conservative,
considering the product.

The logo is just blue and white; you mentioned 3 colors. On your
front page the corporate office fax no. does not line up with rest
of address & phone no.

The pink in your back arrow on your inside pages doesn't seem to
match the site. Maybe change it to light blue or some other color.

Perhaps you can have navigational links to the other pages on the
bottom of each page. The site is not so large that people would get
lost, and it gets old having to go back to the front page every
time you want to see more of the site.

You might want to consider changing the phone no. format from
000 000-0000   to (000)000-0000 or 000-000-0000. I think it would
look better, and your customer service no. would be less likely to
get broken up in some font sizes. 

You may want to state on the first page that latex free kits are
available as many health care workers have some degree of latex
sensitivity or allergy. Your client may have an opinion on that,
also. ;-)

I will leave the technical stuff to other members who are more
proficient in that area.

My viewing stats: MSIE 3x; Pentium PC Win95; 800x600, 256 colors,
with a couple of pages looked at in 640x480, checked in different
font sizes; 15" monitor; 26.4 connection. (Did I forget anything?)

Feel free to email me directly as I only get the digest version and
am often days behind everyone else.

Regards,
Joanne Fate
lafate(at)worldnet.att.net
http://www.angelfire.com/ma/mrsfate/
Please excuse pop-up advertising boxes if they arise; I am hoping
they were only a temporary addition to Angelfire.
ICQ # 4668124

Date: Wed, 18 Feb 1998 02:51:23 -0500
Craig said:

>I am building a site for a client. It is now at a beta stage 
<CLIPPED>
.> There is so much medical
>jargon that I hope that my spelling is ok. I am particularly
>interested
>in color compatibility with different machines and browsers;
>specifically the client's logo color which is r51 g102 b204.

>Images have not yet been final scaled.

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