Re: Lelands Wallpaper Version 4

by "Joanne Fate" <lafate(at)worldnet.att.net>

 Date:  Wed, 4 Mar 1998 21:28:32 -0500
 To:  <leland(at)cyberramp.net>,
<hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org>
  todo: View Thread, Original
Your site looks very good  with its latest redesign. It loaded a
little slow here and there, but overall was reasonably fast,
especially considering the graphic nature of your products. 

At first I didn't see any alt tags on your images, but it seems to
be mostly the front page where they are missing.

I noticed that the text on some pages is centered, on others
left-justified against the border. You may want to pick one style;
I think the left-justified is usually easier to read.

It would be wise to get a secure server line for those people who
are ordering by credit card. It might encourage more orders.

On your installers page you seem to be missing a <P> tag before
Wallpaper Wizard.

You have a few spelling errors which is not too bad for a site of
it's size. Here are a couple:

Wood Basics Prices: This option is only availible = s/b available.
On your order pages "mandatory" is spelled incorrectly.

You really have done a fine job; I like this look the best of what
I've seen of your site.

Website reviewed: http://www.lelandswallpaper.com

Stats: MSIE 3x, Win95 PC, 15" screen, 800x600 (with a couple of
pages looked at in 640x480), 256 colors, 28.8 connection, Northeast
US

Arthur Leland wrote:
>This is our 4th attempt at our site, looking for info on speed,
>ease of =
>navigation, and any tips that may help us improve our site.

>Thanks in advance
>Arthur Leland      <leland(at)cyberramp.net>

Regards,
Joanne Fate
lafate(at)worldnet.att.net
http://www.angelfire.com/ma/mrsfate/
ICQ # 4668124

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