Re: http://www.cdi-online.com
by "marcel kopmels" <marcel_kopmels(at)hotmail.com>
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Mon, 20 Apr 1998 12:06:02 CEST |
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seron(at)adelphia.net |
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hwg-critique(at)hwg.org |
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CDI site critique
IMHO
consider not centering text on company info
structure this text a bit with subheadings
explain first what cdi does and than who founded it and other stuff
people are less interested in
make your portfolio links explicit: explain what is behind each link -
help you potential customers to find something comparable to what they
are looking for
- structure them according to your own sub set: web design, network
services etc
add menu buttons on the portfolio page and consider to make the links
framed in your page so that people stay in the CDI environment
the mailto link is misleading and should also be in normal text (not
everyone can use mailto directly from their pc)
to sum it up:
think in terms of your potential customers and what they are likely to
want to know : explain them your added value
good start but essentials of good communication still missing
marcel kopmels
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