Hi Aaron,

Well, you do have reason to be proud. Your site looks pretty good
at 640x480 and 800x600, even at a couple of different font sizes. I
did not like the bright blue, but that it merely on woman's
opinion. I was not able to get into the Clive Stapleton Lewis site,
so you might want to doublecheck the address.

While I also liked the look of the Survivors of Alderaan page, the
Beautiful Women page was my least favorite. Structurally, though, I
think you ought to consider thumbnails instead of larger images;
then people can look at the pics they'd like to, and not wait for
so much graphic stuff to load.

I did not check all the links, but you do have some interesting
ones. Also, load time on the front page and Alderaan page were both
good.

Good luck; I hope to see the page as it evolves.

My viewing stats: MSIE 3.02; WIN95 Pentium PC; 15" screen set to
256 colors,  640x480 and 800x600, at a couple of different font
sizes; 33.6 connection.

Regards,
Joanne Fate
lafate(at)worldnet.att.net
http://web4.superb.net/mrsfate
http://www.angelfire.com/ma/mrsfate/
ICQ # 4668124


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> From: Aaron Vowels, May 22, 1998 8:06 AM
> 
> Fellow HWG members:
> 
> I've finally gotten a site together that I'm proud of for the
most part.  
> Now I'd like your input on how to make it better.  If you don't
mind, 
> please direct your browser to
http://cbpa.louisville.edu/aaron/index.htm  
> Any constructive comments and/or critiques of the site would be
most 
> appreciated.  Thanks!
> 
> Aaron.
> 

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