Hi Adam,

I only looked at the home page of the site.

The site seems to be about the Holiday Rhapsody of Lights. So the first
thing I look for on the home page is "what is this thing?" Unfortunately
it seems I have to visit another page to find out. As a casual visitor, I
wouldn't bother to do that. So my first suggestion is to make your home
page an introduction to the rest of your site, ie, an introduction to the
Holiday Rhapsody of Lights.

As to the look of the page, I have turned link underlining off, because I
like it that way. I assume you are using CSS to turn it on. Please don't.
It also looks a little odd that the linked text is slightly larger than
the other text.

And one more thing is that the dark red of the "Festival" in the header
(train.gif) clashes a little with the bright red - I would make it the
same red as you are using on the rest of the page, or a completely
different colour.

I really like the way you've laid out the content though - clean, enough
white space, easy to read - very nice! :)

Lynnsey

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On 7/15/98, at 9:59 PM, Adam Nielsen wrote: 

>Please review this for me, keep in mind part of the site is still in
>constructed.
>
>http://www.daycos.com/holidays
>
>> Adam Nielsen
>DayCos Internet Services
>adam(at)daycos.com

Lynnsey Skliros
Mobile Telephone Networks

The mind of the bigot is like the pupil of the eye; the more light you
pour upon it, the more it will contract. -- Oliver Wendell Holmes

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