Hi Pat,

Very nice! It's an enormous improvement. I like what you've done with the
rind pic. I will focus on other things that I think could improve the
site:

1. Frames - I see you are working on a non-frames version, good idea.

2. Everything loaded pretty quickly except for the background - I quite
liked it white, *before* the bg loaded! But if you keep it, try to match
the bgcolor in the body tag to the bg image so that the delay is not as
apparent.

3. I would remove the underlining from the page headings.

4. I would remove the red borders around the logos on
greeting-card-links.htm by setting border=0 in the img tag.

5. On the list of Home Pages on MPD/DID one of the urls has a " tacked
onto the end of it: http://www.asarian.org/~astraea/household/"

6. On the same page you say "Potentially triggering sites are not marked
as such since once you are at most sites they take care of that." - what
do you mean?

7. On the same page the links open new browser windows - it's a good idea
to make it clear that links will open in a new window.

Good luck!

Lynnsey

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On 8/24/98, at 2:17 AM, Pat Stubbs wrote: 

>Please review this site again... as I believe I have implemented most of 
>the changes suggested to me...
>A word of warning the xoom site is slow to load up because of the 
>massive growth the server has experienced... I resized all my 
>graphics... so that should feasibly speed things up...
>
>
>http://members.xoom.com/SpiritedLady/
>
>also same site can be found at:
>
>http://members.tripod.com/~SpiritedLady/
>
>Thank you.
>
>Pat
>
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Lynnsey Skliros
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