Re: hwg-critique-digest V1 #185

hi marko!
   i scoped out yer page and i gots a few suggestions for ya other than 
the klingon writing...lol. your page is supposed to represent a very 
violent, very graphic, very intense RPG. so y doesn't your page look 
violent? or graphic? or intense? you have very few images, and the ones 
you have are buttons. you need graphics from the game! also, your page 
should be violent, this isn't a business page where customer service is 
a must...your viewer isn't gonna mind waiting a few more secs for pics 
to load. try a rollover on the buttons, more frames maybe, more options 
even. don't just have one big paragraph on each page, have assorted 
tables carefully placed around images. your audience will also like 
animated gifs, obviously they've seen the anigif characters already out 
there, they'll expect the same from you. and your page should be 
intense. you started to use that very popular notorious font, the one 
with cross in the O. what happened to it? you stopped? that sets the 
mood for the entire page! and your background is OK, but could be 
darker, redder. i am merely speaking from the audiences point of view. i 
am a diablo player and expect such things from a diablo site. other than 
that that, its very well composed and quite professional. i am sure the 
content is absolutely riviting, ;o�
i hope i have been of some help to you, good luck! - Cyanide-7


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