Re: Critique Garage Sale Site

Nancy, thanks for the comments.  I created this site just to offload my 
personal used stuff.  No hidden agenda here.  Guess I should emphasize 
more on that so viewers won't mistaken me as a commercial house with 
mega $$$ inventory.   ;-)

The three items you saw are just there to help build the site.  
Information about those items are not yet realistic.  

Thanks again.

-Collin


>Date: Wed, 11 Nov 1998 11:23:22 -0500
>From: Nancy <jnwhittley(at)fuse.net>
>Reply-To: jnwhittley(at)fuse.net
>To: Collin Lim <collinlim(at)hotmail.com>
>CC: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
>Subject: Re: Critique Garage Sale Site
>
>Goodness Collin,
>
>Mighty nice site for a "Garage Sale"  or is there more to this
>than you let on.  Extremely professional and great graphics.
>But you only have three things in there.  IMO if you are selling just
>your used stuff and this is your garage sale site (as you are coming 
across)
>
>it is a little too nice.  It looks too business like for someone 
wanting
>to buy garage sale stuff.  Could pass for a business site real easy,
>and I may hesitate buying..  But that is my opinion.  It just seems
>so well done and so professional.
>
>Navigation worked very well, visually attractive, loaded very fast.
>Win 98  Netscape 4.5  800x600  15" monitor.
>
>Good Luck
>
>Collin Lim wrote:
>
>> I guess you can consider this as a commercial site.  This is actually 
a
>> site created to show some of my stuff for sale.  Please critique 
anyting
>> you can think of: speed, layout, navigation, color coordination,
>> clarity, etc.  Don't pay attention to the listed for sale items since
>> they are not all real yet.  Thanks in advance.
>>
>> http://www.ynn.com/collinl/garage/
>>
>> -Collin
>>
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>--
>Nancy Whittley
>
>My attempt at a corporate site:
>http://www.wheelaround.com
>
>My Home Page:
>http://home.fuse.net/jwhittley/
>
>


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