Re: personal site critique

Hi liz,
I am also a web page maker junky lol and only do it right now for fun
but I am starting a business with a friend who is into the graphics
side of things anyways:

1. Navigation: Very easy and no broken links (I don't like frames and
found this was very pleasing to look at)
2.Loading: I was connected to the Internet at 31200bps and you page
just popped up even the graphics hardly any load time at all! good job!
3.Over-all aesthetic appeal: GREAT! I loved the colors and graphics
not too cluttered (its a personal page!) and if your personality
reflects your page then its a good thing!
4.Content Potential: I loved the content people love to know about
people. (at least what I thought)
5.Overall I think it is an excellent page found only one error:
On this page:
http://members.xoom.com/divinyliz/links.html
This Graphic didn't load:
http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Palace/4670/
Keep up the good work 
Vanessa
http://homepages.infoseek.com/~vanessamommy/index.html

---MitsuMiko(at)aol.com wrote:
>
> hiya,
> 
> http://members.xoom.com/divinyliz
> 
> I'm just an everyday person with an everyday personal homepage, and
even
> though it isn't commercial nor does it contribute immensely to the
online
> community, I still would like to get some tips on how to improve my
site.
> I've been working with a new look, but its looking very awkward to
me right
> now, and its probably cuz of the weird box next to the text.  For
some reason
> on paper the page looked okay.  I don't have too much content on
there yet,
> well, actually no content at all really, but I'm working on it...
but anyways,
> here are some stuff I would like to get comments on:
> 
> 1.  navigation (I'm not into frames)
> 2.  load time (it's pretty graphic intensive, since its a personal
site, how
> much would it matter?)
> 3.  over-all aesthetic appeal (is it too cluttered?  not uniform
enough?)
> 4.  content potential (since mostly I only have the ideas, but not
too much of
> the content... and yes, I know content will make or break a site,
but being a
> student, I don't have much time, and since designing comes more
easily to me i
> focus on that first...;^) )
> 5.  whatever else you guys would like to comment on....     
> 
> a note:  I'm really addicted to this webpage making thing, and I'm
> contemplating going into web design, so that is a reason why I'm
asking for a
> critique.
> 
> wells, thanks for your time!  
> 
> liz :)
> 
 
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