Hi all,

Thanks for the feedback!

First of all, a lot of the elements on this site are what my boss has
specced, so they're not going to change (eg: minimilist navigation, copy
all lowercase). Secondly, the [>] buttons on the home page are *meant* to
be clickable - I forgot to add the anchor tags! Sorry about that.

Pat: glad you understood the navigation - I don't know if anyone else did!
Also glad you found the text easy to understand - that was one of my
concerns.

Ana: will make the [>] clickable. I would like to add a little more
colour, but I'm not sure how... I personally hate the way that the
fingerprint on the demo has been coloured. I am rewriting the home page to
work as the others do - that should fix the table problem.

Bert: yes, I still design for 640x480. Unfortunately this site doesn't
scale very well - a definite shortcoming - I will try to work around it.
The all lowercase is as per my boss's requirements... not sure that it
works, myself. Is the navigation too not-there? The slideshow looked more
like a slideshow when each pic was on its own page - something else my
boss changed. Contact details - originally had phone/fax but they were
removed at my boss's request.

Thanks again for the helpful feedback! I will try to work some of your
suggestions into the site.
- Lynnsey


l y n n s e y   s k l i r o s
                      m o b i l e   t e l e p h o n e   n e t w o r k s

The mind of the bigot is like the pupil of the eye; the more light you
pour upon it, the more it will contract. -- Oliver Wendell Holmes

HTML: hwg-critique mailing list archives, maintained by Webmaster @ IWA