Re: My First (gulp) critique!

lil things I've seen...

that blue in the menu on the left has GOT to go..hurts the eyes.

I would seriously consider changing the font

when you follow the links, everything on the page seems to be pretty
mushed together

try to avoid allowing a user to click on a link on the menu to the
place they already are

everywhere you go there's just so much to see, you cannot focus on
only one spot.. try and calm the page down

On the good side the theme stays consistent, graphics seem to be
pretty small (hard for me to tell unless I look at the file size cause
I'm on a LAN at work).  The colors I personally wouldn't choose, but
they do work surprisingly well with the content.

Good luck to you  (remember these are just my opinions.. I'm sure
there are bunches who would beg to differ)

RBrooks








---Todd Gearhart <tebbs(at)juno.com> wrote:
>
> Hi All,
> 
> 
> I've been lurking around the list for quite awhile now, and thought I
> should put my site up for critique.
> I'm not sure if my site is considered a 'personal' site, but it isn't
> quite commercial either. A few things I'd like you to look at:
> 
> 1. Load time.
> 2. Layout and design (I have a feeling that the graphics need
'brightened
> up')	
> 3. Code Neatness (I've got quite a bit of nested tables, and that is
> being worked on to be faster)
> 4. Anythink Else!
> 
> Visit Here: http://toddgearhart.hypermart.net
> 
> TIA,
> 
> 
> Todd Gearhart
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