Re: Critique of Update Online Requested
by Luke Opperman <luko(at)rocketmail.com>
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Fri, 22 Jan 1999 13:23:23 -0800 (PST) |
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waynef(at)cyberenet.net, hwg-crit <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org> |
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The site is solid, the main problems I have with it are:
1. It is long, all on one page. you have several sections,
which could be separate pages. then just have a highlight
or two from some of the sections on the front page along
with the main story or whatever.
2. It is linear and all centered, with little visual
interest. I would consider making it more like a real
newspaper, with teasers about articles inside, with
multiple columns, with an index that is easily found.
have fun,
Luke
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- ( luke opperman ) -
Spigot Graphics, Cohesive Design for the Web
- ( http://spigot.hypermart.net/ ) -
-- ..some tiny cows, two brushstrokes each,
but confidently cows.. - 'Poem' by Elizabeth Bishop
---Wayne Fisher <waynef(at)cyberenet.net> wrote:
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> Good afternoon all:
>
> In the past, I have requested a critique of the Update
Online site
> (http://www.gaywired.com/update), which is an online gay
and lesbian
> news magazine for the San Diego area. I received some
very helpful
> feedback, and performed a lot of cleanup on the site
based upon your
> feedback.
>
> Anyone willing to take a look (once again) at the
finished product and
> let me know if I missed anything that still should be
cleaned up?
>
> Thanks,
>
> Wayne
>
>
>
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