Re: Desperat II

by Luke Opperman <luko(at)rocketmail.com>

Date:	Fri, 5 Feb 1999 16:57:23 -0800 (PST)
To:	Scott Desveaux <sdesveaux(at)usa.net>, hwg-crit <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
	todo: View Thread, Original

> http://home.talkcity.com/WallSt/scottonline

Hmm. I think it was much more distinctive before.
Personally, I liked the old background image. Why are you
now using an image for a plain color?

The navigation images have not improved. The same problems
as with the old ones: the images looks really choppy, the
lines and circles appear to have even less to do with
anything (just taking up space), and the colors don't
match the rest of the site at all. Please, if you change
one thing make it be these images. If you need help or
have questions, ask me or the hwg-graphics list.

Well, I couldn't see anything on any of the internal pages
except the About Me page, which brought up another nav bar
along with it.

Actually, maybe my Netscape is fried. IE is bringing it
up, and now NN won't display the page at all. So the
critique continues in IE.

The nav bar takes up too much space. Javascript errors
("no such interface supported [line 9, char 4]").

Overall I think the page has gotten worse in most ways.
You had fairly good title images last time (though they
were chopped off). I think just adding a title image to
each page would help anchor things, especially if you
improve and match the navigation to it.

Luke

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