Re: Jon Holloway: -http://www.jonholloway.com/-

Hi,

The photos really shout out at you... good job keeping the rest down to a 
minimum. Quick loading, photos look great in AOL, good navigation (contact 
page?). One question: what is the purpose of this site? A resume? Is the 
artwork for sale? Round up more clients? Otherwise, looks wonderful!

Denise

>From: Brian Clark <brianj(at)ais.ais-gwd.com>
>To: hwg-critique <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
>Subject: Jon Holloway: <http://www.jonholloway.com/>
>Date: Thu, 26 Aug 1999 10:36:15 -0400
>
>
>Hello:
>
>I'd like a critique, if you have the time. Quick and simple, or an in-depth
>review -- either is fine.
>
>URL: <http://www.jonholloway.com/>
>
>Description:
>
>Jon Holloway is a photographer located in South Carolina. He has
>photographed for clients such as: GTE Wireless, National Geographic,
>Savannah College of Art & Design, Fuji, Nature Photographer Magazine, Bank
>of America, as well as many clients located throughout the South East.
>
>I'm concerned with:
>
>* Browser, connection speed, display size/resolution/color-depth.
>* First impressions / Any lasting impressions
>* Navigation (as the site is quite extensive)
>* Quality of copy as well as the photographs themselves.
>
>This is a concept design, so any valuable input could potentially be worked
>into the final build.
>
>Thank you very much,
>
>- Brian
>
>P.S. This message bounced yesterday. My apologies to the list moderator and
>the group.

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