Hiya,

Logo:

1. No need to link the logo on the home page back to the home page.
2. The yellow "purple pride" doesn't stand out well against the white
"vikings" - also the yellow looks a bit scrappy as though you lifted it
off a dark background.
3. The purple "minnesota" is almost invisible against the purple
background. The purple helmetty thing does not stand out very well either.

Home page:

1. Font for yellow links on RHS is very hard to read - I think it was
meant to be used at larger sizes.
2. "Posted: date" is almost invisible against that background colour.
3. Java applet doesn't seem to be working.
4. I'm assuming you're aiming this site at Vikings fans, cos nothing on
the home page explains who or what they are.
5. If you're going to use an image map it's a good idea to include text
links at the bottom of the page.

Didn't have time to look at anything else, HTH.

Lynnsey

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On 1999-09-22, at 3:13 PM, Eric J Hoffman wrote: 

>oops....www.purplepride.org
>
>Eric
>
>-----Original Message-----
>From: Phillip Perry (InterDesign) [mailto:pperry(at)inter-design.net]
>Sent: Tuesday, September 21, 1999 11:29 PM
>To: Eric J Hoffman
>Subject: Re: Critique Requested
>
>
>What's the URL?
>----- Original Message -----
>From: Eric J Hoffman <ehoffman(at)smalldogdesign.com>
>To: <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
>Sent: Tuesday, September 21, 1999 11:38 PM
>Subject: Critique Requested
>
>
>Just launched a sport fan site for the MN Vikings NFL franchise...half
the
>features aren't even up, but we already have 6000 hits since
Sunday....some
>pre-release search engine hitting and supporting discussion list helps it
so
>far....
>
>Site was developed in Cold Fusion and is almost entirely database driven.
>Most of the graphics at this time are pretty much what I thought worked,
>thus my requesting your critique.
>
>Thanks for not killing me.  And hey, if your a Vikes fan and would like
to
>volunteer some skills.....this part time at night is killing me.  (this
is a
>non-profit, no charge website)
>
>Eric J Hoffman, MAIP
>Director of Internet Development
>Small Dog Design

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