Hi,

Splash screen
- Took an age to load. In fact after about 5-10 minutes, whatever you were
downloading from netscape (counter?) was still not done.
- Top half of the screen totally different in feel/style to bottom half.
- Totally unnecessary IMO - just slows you down, conveys very little info.
- Specify the size of your images.
- That all-centered-down-the-middle look isn't really professional -
difficult to read, especially with large blocks of copy.

Main page
- Ditto re centered text - also much too large! Short-sighted people will
make their default font larger, don't worry!
- "Click on this to keep this site free and our sponsers happy!" - a
commercial site, promoting a commercial venture, should not need sponsors
to keep its site going.
- If you must use frames, try to integrate them seamlessly, ie, keep the
frame bgs the same colour, etc.
- Having the staff listed under the Menu seems a little cheesy/tacky but
perhaps it will appeal to the clientele.
- Red nav buttons don't tie in at all with other elememnts of the site.

Sorry, no time to look further - HTH.

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On 1999-09-22, at 2:53 PM, Jill George wrote: 

>Ok I screwed up on my own URL It's www.vertigos.net. Sorry about any
>confusion. I've heard the other site is nice, but not mine.
>Thank you
>Jill George

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