went there and got a 500 internal server misconfiguration when I tried to sign
up.

The layout is straightforward and simple, though perhaps a bit TOO
straightforward and simple for my taste. It could use a bit of retuning, in my
opinion, to make it look sexier. Also it's a very cool service, so you might
want to state which stats you'll send, and a bit about why you're doing this!

Look forward to seeing the final version!!!
nick


On 4 Nov 99, at 0:22, Peter Newton wrote:

From:           	"Peter Newton" <c-newton(at)ihug.co.nz>
To:             	<hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Subject:        	My 1st Internet Service
Date sent:      	Thu, 4 Nov 1999 00:22:03 +1300

 > Well Here Goes (deep breath)
 >
 > I have just created a tracking service as the 1st step in a site promotion
 > service I will be offering.
 >
 > I have 3 sites 1 a test site 2 the real thing and 3 this site which I will
 > use to field test any bugfixes, alterations or developements I make on the
 > test site. I would be most gratefull if anyone could consider using this
 > service and provide critique etc so that I can 1stly establish a stable
 > working reliable system, and then to practice responding to customer
 > (your) requests in developing the site.
 >
 >  I have started off simply since I'll most likely be asked to alter most
 >  of
 > it anyway, whats important to me is how it END UP. This will allow me to
 > provide my customers with a quality problem free service. I intend to keep
 > this field trial site indefinitely and build it up into a useful and
 > reliable site so if you choose to use it and like how its progressing you
 > can rely on it being maintained over the long haul.
 >
 > I have not implemented Time Zoneing so it will best suit those who are on
 > the same time as the host server (virtualave.net).  Its probably EST time
 > but I'm not sure. I've displayed both the Server's time and your computer
 > time to make it easy for you to compare.
 >
 > you can find the site at:-
 >
 >  http://nzsc.virtualave.net/joinstats.html
 >
 > and I look forward to your ideas and critiques
 >
 > many thanks
 > Peter Newton
 > (gulp!)
 >
 >
 >


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