Hi, Donna!

Thanks for the excellent advice and for taking the time. I really appreciate it.

colour indeed!

Granada it is!

And the last photo on page 5 is definitely going to change - it will be a 
photograph of the book , after I snap it later today

The "last" thing. I think you're right. but previous would be too long, so I think 
I'll use "back"

Thanks again so much for the time, the advice, and the compliments!

NIck
On 5 Nov 99, at 12:10, Donna M Smillie wrote:

From:           	"Donna M Smillie" <dms(at)zetnet.co.uk>
To:             	<nick(at)nickselby.com>, <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Subject:        	Re: (Fwd) personal / commercial site
Date sent:      	Fri, 5 Nov 1999 12:10:14 -0000

> I really like what you've done with this site, Nick.  The design works
> well, and i'm assuming it fits with the design of the book.  It works for
> me!
> 
> Just a few very picky things I noticed -
> 
> -- On the home page, you mention "BBC and Grenada" - I think it's
> "Granada".  You might want to check that.
> 
> -- On "centurions3", you write "attesting to the color" - the use of the
> american spelling for "colour" jarred, it being a British book, published
> (if I understood correctly) in the UK, about people who have shaped
> Britain.
> 
> -- You've got Doris Lessing pictured on both "centurions4" and
> "centurions5" - is that intentional?
> 
> -- You use "last" as the link to go back to the previous page - until I
> clicked on it, I thought it meant go to the last or final page about the
> book.  Perhaps "previous" might be clearer?
> 
> Like I said, these are picky and I only mention them for completeness. :-)
> I think you've got an excellent site in the making there!
> 
> Regards,
> Donna
> --
> dms(at)zetnet.co.uk
> Different Worlds:  http://www.users.zetnet.co.uk/dms/
> Pictures of the Past, The Leslie Smith Family,
> An Introduction to HTML, Copyright Considerations
> Calendar Wallpapers, Online WW1 Bookshop
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: Nick Selby <nick(at)nickselby.com>
> 
> > I'm working on a site as a surprise present for a photographer who's
> > just had a coffee table book published. It's really a personal site but
> > there is a link to Amazon.co.uk selling the book, so I suppose it's
> > commercial as well. The pages are up at
> > http://www.nickselby.com/djanogly
> 
> 
> 


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