Re: My first request

by "Nick Selby" <nick(at)nickselby.com>

 Date:  Fri, 19 Nov 1999 15:31:58 +0100
 To:  hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
 In-Reply-To:  oemcomputer
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I like it. I think it makes good use of space, is fast and easy to navigate. You 
may want to consider (I know I always say this but it's really important) a 
form for email contact as opposed to mailto: links, as people on office 
networks often have trouble with mailto links. And you should makle any 
Hepler logo a link back to the front page. 

Also, someting bothers me - and I can't put my finger on it - about the size of 
the font for the testimonials. It may be the font, it may be the size, it may be 
the relation to the text opposite (to the left of) it, but something about it 
unbalances the front page. 

Nice work!


On 18 Nov 99, at 21:11, JanetMichael wrote:

Send reply to:  	"JanetMichael" <janet(at)mybriteideas.com>
From:           	"JanetMichael" <JanetMichael(at)email.msn.com>
To:             	"HTML Guild Critique List" <hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org>
Subject:        	My first request
Date sent:      	Thu, 18 Nov 1999 21:11:14 -0500
Organization:   	Brite Ideas

> I've only been *lurking* for a short time and this is my first request, so
> be gentle <g>
> 
> I recently finished the design of this site and would like some *unbiased*
> feedback. I won't take too much of it personally, I don't do any of the
> coding (although I am taking a basic class to try to grasp the
> fundamentals) or graphic design, I leave that to my designer. Most of my
> contribution lies in the layout and overall marketing value. So...let me
> have it!
> 
> How is the navigation, load times, overall eye appeal, etc.?
> 
> http://www.heplerhomes.com
> 
> Janet
> Brite Ideas
> A Full Service Marketing Firm Specializing in
> Internet Marketing Strategies
> http://www.mybriteideas.com
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 


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www.nickselby.com

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