Re: Please review

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Hello Mark,

I liked the look of the page for the most part. It feels empty to me 
though.

Comments:
1. The image map on the main page is enormous, and slow to load. Can 
it be optimized for better loading time?

2. The animated pencil was annoying. Once it all appeared, it moved 
really quickly on my machine. At first I thought it was a picture of 
the Cat in the Hat's hat.

3. The background of the large image map didn't quite match the 
background color of the page. 

4. What if someone gets to this page without images turned on? There 
isn't any information at all in text. Also, the graphics can't easily 
be indexed but text is.

5. What is the purpose of the page? To get customers? To show what 
work you've already done (a portfolio)? 

6. Is your phone number really the same as your fax number? And how 
about including an e-mail address?

Just flesh it out some more. Better define the purpose of the page. 
You probably know better than I do, since you're in advertising. Is 
this just for your local market? If so, do you need a Spanish 
alternative? 

Viewed/surfed with:  Netscape Navigator 3.0 Gold; 28.8 modem;
Windows 95; 800x600x256 colors; java and javascript turned off.

I hope that helps. Good luck. Michael

At 11:58 PM 12/17/97 -0500, you wrote: 
>>>>
I just completed this site 
(<http://members.tripod.com/~Newsbird>http://members.tripod.com/~Newsb
ird) to promote my advertising business. I'd appreciate any 
constructive criticism you can offer.
  
Thanks,
  
Mark

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