First small-scale commercial project site check, please?
by Roger Stenning <roger(at)isg.abel.co.uk>
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Sat, 13 Feb 1999 04:34:30 +0000 |
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Hi.
A freind of mine asked me to simplify and enlargen his somewhat small,
commercial website, catering for the Airsofty skirmishing hobby.
Having constructed it as best I can, I now really need some peer review.
The test site URL is at:
http://www.abel.net.uk/~isg/socom/index.html
I'd like to know the following, particularly:
Is it clear, and easily understood?
Does the layout cause problems?
Does it match up to the brief I was given (see the page "About this website")?
I would, of course, appreciate any comments on the site, generally or
specifically.
For comparison, the original site is currently (supposed to be) at:
http://www.fortunecity.com/marina/dolphin/124/socom.htm
Again, this is my first commercial project, so all input on the project
would be gratefully accepted. Many thanks in advance.
Roger
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