First small-scale commercial project site check, please?

by Roger Stenning <roger(at)isg.abel.co.uk>

 Date:  Sat, 13 Feb 1999 04:34:30 +0000
 To:  hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
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Hi.

A freind of mine asked me to simplify and enlargen his somewhat small,
commercial website, catering for the Airsofty skirmishing hobby.

Having constructed it as best I can, I now really need some peer review.

The test site URL is at:
	http://www.abel.net.uk/~isg/socom/index.html

I'd like to know the following, particularly:

Is it clear, and easily understood?
Does the layout cause problems?
Does it match up to the brief I was given (see the page "About this website")?

I would, of course, appreciate any comments on the site, generally or
specifically.

For comparison, the original site is currently (supposed to be) at:
	http://www.fortunecity.com/marina/dolphin/124/socom.htm

Again, this is my first commercial project, so all input on the project
would be gratefully accepted. Many thanks in advance.

Roger

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