Critique Hypoglycemia Site

Hello fellow critiquers,

My apologies if you have two copies of this message.. I didn't see my
previous post in the digest today, so I'm posting again.. *bangs on computer*

Please visit my site at: 
<a href="http://www.photobooks.com/~poof/hypoglycemia/index.html">
http://www.photobooks.com/~poof/hypoglycemia/</a>

I'm looking for general impressions, as well as answers to a few questions:

1. Should I correct the typos in the "Personal Touch" section? These are
the way the postings came to me.. and I was wondering whether I should edit
them or leave them be..

2. Any ideas on sprucing up the page? There aren't many graphics associated
with this topic.. so I chose an open book motif.. 

:)
Lindsey Milton
"When this ultimate crisis comes ... when there is no way out - that is the
very moment when we explode from within and the totally other emerges; the
sudden surfacing of a strength, a security of unknown origin, welling up
from beyond reason, rational expectation, and hope." - Emily Dickinson

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http://www.photobooks.com/~poof/ - Word Play
"Thy Word is a Lamp unto my feet, and a light unto my path" Psalm 119

  

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