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Re: Can you helpby Bonnie Nilsen <bnilsen(at)netidea.com> |
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Hi Jerry, [Win'95 640X480 NN 4.08 28.8] I like the muted background image - your text shows up fine against it. Had to scroll to see all of the photos. (Great opening shot of the pelicans!) Photos took a long time to load - maybe try to crunch them a bit. I think you need to tighten up the meta description and cut down on the repetition of words in the keywords. I think the page is a good invitation to your place, Bonnie <http://www.netidea.com/~bnilsen/index.html> -------------------------------------------------- At 11:59 AM 02/22/1999 -0500, Fowler, Jerry B. wrote: >Hello, >"I'm very new to HWG and to web authoring. I have started a site, >with help, to promote my weekend house to the occasional renter when I >am not there. >I also promote knowlege about, Port O'Connor, a small fishing >village on the Texas Gulf Coast. Port O'Connor is also a great place for >bird watching. >My goal is to let people looking for a quite vacation location on the >coast know about Port O'Connor >and it's attractions, by doing this it is my hope I will get an >occasional renter to stay in my house. > >I,m really not sure about my META tags and keywords and my atemps to >promote the page. >The page has been registered with some of the main search engines. > >Please critique my page. Http://pelicanperch.8m.com/POC.htm > >Thank you, > >Jerry Fowler > >
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