Re: Chart North Web Design site critique

by "Bud Polk" <cybrmage(at)dave-world.net>

Date:	Fri, 26 Jan 2001 10:31:19 -0600
To:	<hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>, <karen(at)chartnorth.com>
In-Reply-To:	chartnorth
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On 26 Jan 2001, at 8:10, Karen and Andy Small wrote:

> We finally got our web design business site finished.  I'd
> appreciate any comments.  Thanks so much for your time!

Dear Karen and friends,

A very handsome site. Clean, uncluttered, nice layout, easy 
navigation, *great* original artwork.

One minor issue. Your ALINK color is too dark and does contrast 
enough with the surrounding text. A lighter blue would work and be 
easy to implement with your CSS. Nicely done stylesheet, btw.

The other issue is more important. The "Our Philosophy" section 
doesn't convince me that I should try you as a web designer. I think 
you need to use text, not a list. And you should use sales language. 
Think of benefits. If I am a potential client, how will me firm benefit 
from using your services as opposed to other design shops. What 
sets you apart?

Best regards,
Bud Polk

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