Re: New section critique, please

by "Rajnish Bhaskar" <r.bhaskar(at)compserv.gla.ac.uk>

 Date:  Tue, 13 Nov 2001 09:56:19 -0000
 To:  wendy(at)shadesdesign.com
 Cc:  hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
 In-Reply-To:  shadesdesign
  todo: View Thread, Original
Hi Wendy,

> I have just added a gift shop to my website. Please take a look and
> let me know if all the pages are working as they should.
> 
> http://www.shadesdesign.com/homesite/decorative/decoart.html

Windows 2000, 1600x1200 (browser takes up about 2/3 of that), Mozilla 
0.9.5+, LAN connection.

I only had a quick look, but it seems like a nice clean design.  I 
have a fast connection, but I'd hate to try and look at this site 
over a modem connection, with all the graphics (many of which could, 
IMO, be text).  As far as I can tell, the only text on the page is 
the links at the bottom of the page.  On the other hand, I see that 
you've got alt and title attributes in most of your (important) 
images.  You do need to add some for the "feather smudge blessing 
fan" '36" wide quilted yule tree skirt', and for the main "text" of 
the page -- storefront1101_09.png.

HTH,
Raj.
-- 
Rajnish Bhaskar
r.bhaskar(at)compserv.gla.ac.uk, http://lordofthemoon.com
IT Education Unit, University of Glasgow
http://www.iteu.gla.ac.uk/
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