Hi Richard,

> I am currently taking eclasses with IWA-HWG and as a student I would
> like a critique of my  project site located here..
> http://www32.brinkster.com/taineus/rhopkins.html

I don't like the grey background, which gives the site an amateurish 
feel.  Also, you display the W3C validation logo when the site 
doesn't actually validate.  You should fix this error first.

As to your content, you assume that the reader knows what an "LZ" or 
"FSB" is -- even your explanations don't really make sense.  Only the 
mention of the date (1970--71) gives an indication that it's 
something military related (Vietnam?).

Your story "fate is the hunter" also doesn't really make a lot of 
sense to someone who wasn't there.  I'm not /really/ sure what you're 
trying to say, to be honest.

Sorry if this has sounded a bit negative, but hopefully it will help 
you to improve the site.

Raj.

-- 
Rajnish Bhaskar, r.bhaskar(at)compserv.gla.ac.uk
http://lordofthemoon.com

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