Re: Critique for New Site

by Kym Jones <kjones(at)adam.com.au>

Date:	Thu, 20 Jul 2000 00:26:08 +0930
To:	Rick Alexander <tralexan(at)mindspring.com>, hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
In-Reply-To:	mindspring
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Rick...

Great site. I like the color scheme and I really appreciate well made
original graphics. The only niggling little thing that I would pick on is
the line of text underneath the top banner. It's really hard to read and
I'm having trouble making sense of it...I think you might need a comma in
there.

Should it be:

"The best from the past, the best of the present & the best that will be
(comma) come together on the eighth day"

....and Mz Spellchecker also found a spelling error...wouldn't ya just know
it !! hahaha

on the pricing.html page...you mention "maintainence" ...it's maintenance. 

Unless, it's an American spelling of which I am blissfully unaware.

Kym



















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